One morning at Pearl Harbor

A light mist shrouded Pearl Harbor, Hawaii.  The normally bright blue water was more of a dull gray, matching the U.S. Navy ships that slipped in and out of its protected waters.  A black Lincoln Towncar slowly pulled up to the battleship and stopped.  The driver got out, walked around to the passenger side rear door and opened it. A shaky foot emerged.

Capt. John Franklin, U.S. Navy (Ret.), slowly got out of the car and looked up at the mighty ship.  His eyes immediately began to water as tears and memories flooded forth.  The driver popped the trunk, got out a walker and helped the old man to his feet.  The driver paused, saluted and waited by the car.  Capt. Franklin slowly made his way to the gangplank.

As he pushed the walker up the walkway he noticed a strange thing beginning to happen: His legs were getting stronger.  About halfway up, he threw the walker aside, “I hated the dam’ thing anyway,” the old sailor growled.  He paused, looked up at the mighty guns and the colorful flags.  The fog swirled around the superstructure and the steel guns.  He continued on his journey.

He got to the top and took a deep breath. The smell of fresh paint, oil and wood tickled his senses, unleashing memories he had not thought about in 70 years.  He stuck out his chest and said, “Capt. Franklin reporting for duty. Permission to come aboard?”  The faceless officer said, “Permission granted, sir.”

Captain John Franklin walked to aft of the ship and approached a 5-inch gun. He put his hand on the warm steel, climbed a ladder and sat inside.  He was now manning his position on the U.S.S. Arizona. He had rejoined his shipmates who had perished 70 years ago while he was ashore on leave.  Smiling, he waved at the driver on the dock below.  The driver saluted back and drove away.

The Captain was home.  He looked out at the shore and everything looked just like it had early on the morning of December 7, 1941.  Suddenly the sun broke through the mist at Pearl Harbor. And when the sunbeam hit the ghost battleship, it disappeared.

At that moment, alarms went off in room BB39 of the Naval hospital.  “We’re losing him!” the nurse screamed.  A team of nurses and doctors scrambled like ants and tried to save him but with no luck.  Captain John Franklin, U.S. Navy (Ret.), survivor of the day that will live in infamy,  faded into history.

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10 Responses to One morning at Pearl Harbor

  1. blues4you says:

    Damn son, seems like each story is better than the last one.

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  3. Brent Busbea says:

    Awesome story! All I could say was wow!

  4. msblondie says:

    Having been to Pearl Harbor in 2005… Yes you feel the souls there. It is remarkable place and site.
    Working with our vets, we are losing our wwII heros at a very fast pace. I have 2 in their 90s that play bingo with me each month – great men.

  5. dhcoop says:

    Chillbumps and tears!

  6. Barb says:

    Wow!!! Brent is right…just wow!!

  7. CoachP says:

    Marshall – You did it again – both the story & the ‘Toon. Great tributes to the WWII vets!

    As a military brat, who was stationed in Hawaii while they were building the Arizona Memorial, I got a chance to talk to quite a few of the Pearl Harbor vets just 20 years after the attack (and eavesdrop as they exchanged tales with each other. . . while their memories were still sharp). You definitely captured the “feel”. Well done!

  8. parrotmom says:

    Really Awesome!!!

  9. Karen Putz says:

    Well done. Made me cry. (Again, dang it.)

  10. harold wright says:

    You have a way with words, sir.Great! Makes me want to read some of your other writings.

    Harold

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