Bicycle

I’m proud of my son for writing this.  The fact that he is an avid reader shows.

Bicycle

By my 11-year-old son.

My family together forms a bicycle.

My mom is the handlebars and brakes

Because she steers us through tough situations and stops for emergencies

My dad is the wheels

Because he drives the family through life

Then my brothers are the pedals

Who push us forward

Last I am the chain

That keeps us from breaking into shards

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10 Responses to Bicycle

  1. Barb says:

    You sure he is only 11 years old? Awesome!!

  2. Marshall Ramsey says:

    Think it’s neat how he sees the family.

  3. pncpnthr says:

    Very interesting analogy. And you are sure he’s just 11?

  4. dhcoop says:

    Amazing! You have some awesome offspring, Marshall!

  5. Mrs. H says:

    They may look like their mother, but at least one thinks like you.

  6. Legal Eagle says:

    Thank you for sharing with us, Marshall. What a great story.

  7. GrammarGirl says:

    Beautiful!

  8. heather says:

    Wonderful…. I love his train of thought. Very talented.

  9. Ed Munn says:

    Me thinks there’s a talent there that needs to be fed and nourished. Of course, after reading your drawings in words, I see where he gets it from.

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